Sunday, 24 January 2016

COFFEE CHAINS...




COFFEE CHAINS...


Doctor Foster got mugged in a Costa in Gloucester,
by a barista imposter.


You're nobody's hero if you drink in a
Caffe Nero.

Drink in a Wimpy?
No, to put it simply...

Coffee Republic?
I know I am a simple chap,
But is this country on a map?
Some South-American dictatorship?
The thought of which would make me sick.

Would you try Apostrophe?

Only to pop in for a pee.

Pret a Manger?
I'll remain to them a stranger.



How about a Burger King?
Only to learn why the caged birds sing...


Well how about... Ahem... the golden arches sign?
Only if resigned,
To be sued for stepping out of line,
A prospect which  I must decline,
So with fingers crossed,
Behind my back,
I'll say their coffee's simply  fine
In fact I'll say it is divine.


Meet you in a Starbucks?
Go and get f@@ked!

© Stephen Evans 2012

LATE IN THE EVENING






LATE in the  evening

At Tintagel most fitting

Like Isolde and Tristan

Upon the high cliff top

The sun's slow decline  to

A scarred charcoal line

Its terminal rays sad setting the distance

Drawing an end to the day and our time.


The warmth of the summer left too far behind us

The weakness of will and the skin's soft corruption

Worn down to the bone and hardened to stone

Holding the fossil that had once been your hand

And the churn of the shingle and the waves' wanton crashing

Crushing the tired last trace of the day

The chill of the sea-mist

All ceasing of colour

Replaced by a shroud of a permanent grey.


(c) Stephen Evans 2015





What Do You See?

What do you see

When I'm sat in my chair?

Do you see the young man who never would sit down


And never have been caught dead in a chair


Who would rather set it alight and be up for the fight


Or do you see the drained old man without the wit or care


To free himself from his comfort snare?



I feel you measure me with your look


However softly sent


Within our share of living room


The afternoon has waited too long and has left

I ponder these questions I never dare ask

I haven't the courage to hear your answer.

(c) S Evans 2015

Friday, 7 August 2015

St. Enodoc's Chuch, North Cornwall



Last month I visited the beautiful coastline of North Cornwall with one mission in mind.  Setting off from Exmouth, the journey to Daymer Bay, near Rock and Padstow took 1 hour and 45 minutes.  Not a long journey to travel to what always seems to me another country.  Like crossing the Styx, crossing the River Tamar is indeed a journey into a different realm but of the positive kind.  More a country than a county, to visit Cornwall is to visit a land rich in a unique culture and history.  Even the geography, with its wild moorland, Mediterranean fauna and high-thicketed lanes, prone to sudden sea-mists lends a sense separateness on the senses.    However, despite my assertion above, there was one aspect of mortality that I had in mind when visiting the secluded St Enodoc's Church, Trebetherick, and that was to visit the grave of Sir John Betjeman, the former Poet Laureate.

Betjeman conjures up for me, memories of O-Level English Literature and being introduced to a poet who ought not to make any connection with me.  He was from a privileged background, wrote about churches, architecture and made middle–age observations on middle-class life.  How on Earth could this man make any connect with a fifteen-year old boy interested only in science fiction, fantasy and music?  But he did.  His poems made a direct connection not only with me but with most of the other students in the class.  His poems were witty (Upper Lambourne) and somehow tinged with sadness and regret (A Child Ill, Norfolk).  They also had a subversive quality, (Slough for example) which would appeal to most youths “Come friendly bombs and fall on Slough/It isn’t fit for humans now”.  Despite his genteel and toffish exterior, he had a subversive quality and embodied  a conservatism with a small c with his unique sensibility towards the aesthetic and spiritual quality of buildings.  Betjamen bemoaned the destruction of a pastoral and historic Britain by face-less bureaucrats, small-town aldermen and city-planners whom he argued, had  ripped  the hearts out of towns and cities, replacing them with sanitised and homogenised functional architecture which in turn sapped the individuality and spirituality from the inhabitants of such places and thus achieving more destruction to post-war Britain than the Luftwaffe had ever done to challenge the national psyche and sense of identity. 

His poems were beautifully constructed and accessible and that is perhaps one of the reasons they remain so popular among people from all backgrounds and why Betjeman remains still in the public memory.   That first O-Level year I studied Betjeman, Robert Frost, Edwin Muir and Edward Thomas and while I admired the qualities of all the poets and respected their craft, only Betjeman and Frost remained affixed to my memory.  They taught me that profundity need not reside in elaborate words but in simple, straight-forward language. 

St. Enodoc’s Church is small and unassuming; a fitting resting place for a man who wrote so fondly of Cornwall and Devon but more particularly of the dividing line between land and sea. Only on revisiting his poetry prior to journeying to Cornwall did I realis just how much, in terms of binary opposites, images and themes,  sea and sand, water and land, the imaginary and the real recur, throughout his work.

  

The chapel overlooks the lovely Daymer Bay and access for me that day was achieved via a golf course.  From this approach one can only see the churches almost stooping steeple rising from the grassland which is once surreal and intriguing.  While warily looking out for low flying golf balls, I negotiated the course and within five-minutes was at the church’s entrance with its unusual Lychgate made from the local stone and slate with the coffin shelf being placed at its centre rather than at one side.



 As one walks through the entrance, John Betjeman’s grave is immediately to the right.  It is modest yet ornate, containing flourishes in the Victorian and Edwardian tradition.








It was a beautifully warm Cornish summer day and the view from the graveyard over the bay and St. Minver lowlands was stunning.  I was not alone.  During the thirty-minutes I spent exploring the churchyard and the church, at least twelve other people arrived.  They all visited Betjeman’s grave and had their photograph taken there.  Access to the church is also by the South West Coastal path and later learned that there is a Sir John Betjeman walk which I assume many of these people had taken.






A while ago I posted Betjeman’s poem ‘Norfolk’.  I feel it fitting to post ‘Cornish Cliffs’.

(c) Stephen Evans 


Cornish Cliffs    - John Betjeman

Those moments, tasted once and never done,
Of long surf breaking in the mid-day sun.
A far-off blow-hole booming like a gun-

The seagulls plane and circle out of sight
Below this thirsty, thrift-encrusted height,
The veined sea-campion buds burst into white

And gorse turns tawny orange, seen beside
Pale drifts of primroses cascading wide
To where the slate falls sheer into the tide.

More than in gardened Surrey, nature spills
A wealth of heather, kidney-vetch and squills
Over these long-defended Cornish hills.

A gun-emplacement of the latest war
Looks older than the hill fort built before
Saxon or Norman headed for the shore.

And in the shadowless, unclouded glare
Deep blue above us fades to whiteness where
A misty sea-line meets the wash of air.

Nut-smell of gorse and honey-smell of ling
Waft out to sea the freshness of the spring
On sunny shallows, green and whispering.

The wideness which the lark-song gives the sky
Shrinks at the clang of sea-birds sailing by
Whose notes are tuned to days when seas are high.

From today's calm, the lane's enclosing green
Leads inland to a usual Cornish scene-
Slate cottages with sycamore between,

Small fields and tellymasts and wires and poles
With, as the everlasting ocean rolls,
Two chapels built for half a hundred souls. 







Monday, 27 July 2015

KEEPING A NOTE-BOOK TO HAND

Carrying a note-book with you at all times is an invaluable way of preserving any thoughts, phrases or ideas for your work.  If your memory is similar to mine you may find that you have a great idea, a word or a phrase and then it's gone within minutes (even seconds!) despite assuring yourself that you will remember it or will write it down when your home.







A note-book is a great way of preventing this and the ensuing frustration of forgetfulness.  I usually buy a pack of cheap note-books and write on the cover the date I started it.  I record the number of books I've used that month.  In it I scribble and jot down thoughts, reflections, ideas, in fact anything that springs to mind and I think may be of use later when writing. I write down the date I made these notes.   Some of the notes are never used while others form the foundation for a poem.  I can't emphasise the usefulness of carrying a note book.  Oh, and a pen or pencil comes are pretty handy too!





Friday, 24 July 2015

WRITING POETRY: FINALISING WORK

Hi All,

I've been busy over the last months working on a number of poems and 'honing' them so to speak.  I don't know about how you approach writing your poems but I tend to work on several at the same time. 

I get down my initial thoughts- sometimes there's also a concept involved in there but not always, and then work on them.  Sometimes there's an impasse and I leave them for several days (sometimes several weeks) and return to them again and pick up from where I left off.  I find that it is amazing how the break focuses the mind and can solve the problem you've encountered with the poems construction whether its word-choice, or scansion (scan). Some poems demand more time on them than others.  Some poems have been started eight-nine months ago, while others have been written and posted within a couple of days.  There's no magic formula and perhaps some poems demand time to ferment or grow as they are actually mirroring our own thought-processes and emotional responses.

Finalising the poem is also tricky concept.  When is a poem truly finished?  I'm presently working on six poems to differing degrees. When do you feel a poem is actually 'fit for purpose'?  Tricky...

When I used to teach poetry, I used to show my students a copy of the draft manuscript of Wilfred Owen's' Dulce et Decorum est'. They were amazed at the fact that the poem had taken several different forms and versions before becoming the famous poem we recognise today. 





 I hoped that this would help them understand that:

1. poetry rarely is the product of some muse or divine inspiration that allows us to write perfectly formed and finished verse (this equally applies to prose) writ on stone and inviolate like the Ten Commandments

2. poetry is graft and poems (and prose) have to be worked upon and may undergo many revisions and changes until the writer is satisfied that s/he has created a semblance of a poem, a finished version 

3.  even the great poets had to work on their poetry.  This was a great confidence-boost for my students who often thought that great and skilled poets could merely bang out a fantastic poem at whim. I should imagine this rarely happened.  The students always felt more confident about their own creations after this and saw the process of revision as a vital part of the 'craft'.

When I'm writing, I rely on a feeling that it may be good enough to at least be work in progress.  I often post poems that are work in progress and then return to them and revise later. You may have seen revisions in my poems when I've re-posted them on the blog. 

A great way of achieving a degree of quality control is to show your work to a trusted friend or friends whose opinion you respect and you know will give you honest and constructive feedback.  Never be afraid of asking for and acting on advice - it's invaluable and has helped me many times.




TAKING A WALK

Those times when I'm dearly in need of inspiration or at least some space to collect my thoughts, I find a short walk often helps. I don't try and force a thought, they seem to naturally arise from the walk, perhaps, the cadence of our steps naturally match the rhythms of our thoughts - but a short stroll generally works wonders.  Again, I take my notebook and record the idea before I forget!

I'd be really interested to hear if walking works for you or if you've found have any other activities help in the same way.  Please keep your suggestions respectable...  :-) 





APPS



There are also some useful Apps for mobiles that act as recorders for dictation.  These are especially useful if you want to trial some of your work for their sounds (for example assonance and alliteration) and rhythm. Reciting to the machine and then playing it back really does help you work on the sound dimension to your work.

Friday, 10 July 2015

Floral Dress

Floral Dress


That floral dress
You wore last night
On one of those rare occasions
When we make an effort to go out
I saw again today
In a photograph I'd  taken of 
You six years before
That very dress!
Revisiting this other women
Foolishly I thought I'd captured 
Revealed to me from darkness
Your inner-light
The camera seldom shares
Your singular  lack of vanity
The selfless frugality
You wear upon yourself

When it comes to paying the bills and
Catering for the children's needs
Their constant guardian at night
Your floral dress, that photograph
Your life-long love letter to us all
Shames every line I scheme to shape
Or any words 
I could ever hope to write.


© Stephen Evans 2015

A Coffee Moment



A Coffee Moment

Gazing at my coffee cup
Two-thirds empty
While row on row of wooden isles
The other customers 
Of me indifferent, live their lives
Consumed within their separate worlds
While I serve up these lines.


© Stephen Evans 2015